You have some ideas here, many that I do not agree with, but you present a thesis that warrants more attention and fleshing out. This needs to be at least 3 12 minute essays at least if you wish to start to defend your positon. It will also take more research, since I can tell that you are not proximate or familiar with the nuances of what you are writing about. Yet, these topics are worthy of contemplation. My advice is really dig into this and produce something great and worty of the topic and yourself.